Sample Character Time!

So, just what does a character look like in the new rpg I'm designing? Take a look!
Iron Ghost (originally Marcus Lanner)
Race: Human
Rearing: Remnant
Pursuit: Brave
Description: Athletic and deeply tanned, with dreadlocked brown hair, narrow brown eyes, and many dark ritual scars forming swirling patterns over his skin.
Personality: Is convinced that returning to a more primitive existence is less destructive and far more honest. Iron Ghost eschews his past, and is loyal, forthright, and thoughtful.
Background: Marcus left his Remnant community in disgust at their over-reliance on technology, and was adopted by a tribe when he was found dying in the wilderness; he struggled hard to become a valuable member of the tribe, eventually earning the name Iron Ghost and becoming a Brave.
Attributes
Muscle 3, Understanding 3, Tenacity 2, Appeal 2, Nimbleness 3, Toughness 3, Senses 2
Skills
Athletics 2, Brawl 2, Drive 1, Intimidate 2, Lore 2, Melee 2, Notice 2, Persuade 1, Ride 3, Shoot 3, Stealth 2, Survive 2, Tech 2, Zoofinity 1
Health: OOOOOO OOOOOO
Armor: None.
Weapons: Knife, heavy vicious bludgeon (large carved wooden club set with animal claws), short bow (12 arrows).
Clothing: Hide pants, leather vest (decorated with bone beadwork), bear fur cloak, hide boots secured with leather strips.
Gear: Gas mask, Geiger counter.
Transport: Mutant horse with saddle blanket and harness.